The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The two maps show the road access to the city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
In 2007, there is a ring road around the hospital that intersects the hospital road, which the gate of the hospital is on. The parking area of the staff and public is on the east bank of the hospital road and to the north side of the city road which runs from the west to the east and vertically intersects the hospital.
Things are a bit changed in 2010. For instance, they have turned the two intersections of ring and hospital road, hospital road and city road into roundabouts. Moreover, they cancelled the bus stops but built a station connected to both of the roundabouts instead. The parking area for staff has taken the place of the old one, while the public parking area is to the east side of the hospital. But we have gladly known that the ring road remains the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3875 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27180407386 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4625 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.097637945 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435167182839 0.215688989381 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224898959972 0.103423049105 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.279867061932 0.0843802449381 332% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.457236438699 0.15604864568 293% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.318127407741 0.0819641961636 388% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 40.7170731707 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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