International travel has become cheaper, more and more countries have opened their doors and more tourist go abroad, for travelling. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages.
With the advent of technology, a vast number of cheap and comfortable sources of travel are available. This had made it easy for tourists to visit other countries and places. This industry of tourism has many advantages except some disadvantages.
Firstly, tourism has many monetary advantages. Tourism is an important part of economy. To illustrate its add to foreign exchequer, creates income and generated jobs. Also tourism industry develops many other industries like hotel industry, transportation and restaurants. Besides tourism proves informatory. People increase their knowledge of various fields like cultures, geographical areas and their realm of perspective widens. Then, tourism alleviates tension. It brings recreation and relaxation. For instance, people visit mesmerizing spots and forget their sorrows .
On the other hand, the sector is associated with negative externalities, such as environment degradation. Tourist may exploit natural environment and increase pollution. For example, tourist put enormous stress on local land use, and can lead to soil erosion, natural habitat loss and more pressure on endangered species. Moreover there are dangers of increase in crime. Tourists are suitable crime targets as they carry money and valuable objects are in a holiday mood and hence tend to be less prudent. There have been surveys in various nation which shows that tourist arrival has a severe impact on criminal against both property and the person.
The comparative analysis definitely shows that advantage of international travelling outweigh the disadvantages. However downsides cannot be overlooked and therefore the governments should take adequate measures to ensure that they reap maximum benefits from this industry.
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- International travel has become cheaper more and more countries have opened their doors and more tourist go abroad for travelling Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages 69
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, hence, however, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81782945736 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94064051126 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686046511628 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3486059239 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.05 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238135617848 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560444337047 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472136514466 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117773529528 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157572711732 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.59 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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