In some countries increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much of fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose higher taxes on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree?
In myriad nations, numerous individuals are suffering from various diseases related to health. One of the reasons of health problems is increasing trend of eating fast food in contemporary times. It is committed that governing bodies should take action in term of collecting more taxes from the consumer on particular unhealthy food. I can not be completely associated myself from this point of view. I believe that imposing higher taxes is not proper approach to solve such type of issues. Ideas enunciated further in my discourse will support my point of view.
Discussing few points to prove my disagreement, the foremost one is that money will not make impact to stop people from eating their favourite fast food. Today average financial condition of people is at high level. Food is cheapest things which can be affordable by lower class of the society. Higher authorities can charge double on fast food but they can not make in value of thousand. Thus, people have ability to purchase it and can enjoy it. Furthermore, certain class of the society have high willingness to eat outer food in shop of food and hotel. They can not be leave it for chunk of money. Some people are very exited for eating it. Thus, it is impossible to stop them from eating fast food.
Additionally, some individuals of society have to eat street food because they live far from their home for getting better job and better opportunities of business. They left their home only for more money. They do not get any help to make their food. As well as, they do not have enough knowledge about cooking. Although taxes on food is high, they have to eat fast food anyhow Furthermore, professional person are struggling with time too. Person who involve in job with high responsibility might not able to do find time for cook for himself. In this scenario individual choose fast food to eat.
To conclude, it is irrefutable fact that health disease is increasing day by day because of habit of eating fast food. I tend to believe that increasing taxes of fast food is not appropriate solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82352941176 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60856362671 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512605042017 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9400279845 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.75 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.875 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371368117176 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110060275249 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658766526991 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232153904392 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106631919862 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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