Write a letter to the local council about the closure of a playground to your area because children don’t use it much. In your letter
Why don’t many children use it?
How is the playground important for children?
Give some suggestions how to increase the playground usage?
Dear Sir,
My name is Gaurav Patel.I am resident of Maninagar area.I am writing this letter to express my concern about the closure of playground in my area.I got this news from local newspaper.
Local council has taken this decision because the playground is in dilapidated condition as it has not been used by children since so many time.There are couple of reasons why children do not use this playground. One of the major reason is that children these days hardly get a time to play because of academic study. And secondly if they get a free time then mostly they prefer to spend their time either in front of tv screen or on mobile.This playground provide immense benefits to children. Firstly children get a place to play outdoor games which improve their physical fitness and it is need of the hour as obesity is the common problem in kids in this modern world. As such playground is hard to find in most cities because of scarcity of land.
I would like to give some suggestions to increase the usage of playground. Awareness can be created among children regarding the importance of outdoor activities. Government also can install fancy rides to attract children.
I would like to request you to reconsider your plan and drop the idea of closure of playground.
Hoping for a prompt and positive consideration in this matter.
Yours Sincerely,
Gaurav Patel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90212765957 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64282384608 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629787234043 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0681472257 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336442616852 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107832306464 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668049643443 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139605431881 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704371520475 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.