The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Looking into the recent survey pertaining to women position has been paradigm shift in last couple of decades. Meanwhile, number of youngish people are facing problems like teenagers crime or the question raised that women are less care about their children due to job that eventually is not far beneficial for children's career as well as bringing them up. My inclination discord with the view which can be elaborated by following arguments:
To commence with, women are facing domestic problems due to several reasons that directly impact on their children life along side in their social lives. In todays fast pace world, it has commonly seen that people have become quite busy as compare to past where parents do not have enough time to look after their children, many a time I have noticed that mostly parents are less indulgent about their infants that actually can devastate their life. Moreover, many intellectual people are concerned that it's dire necessity for parents to take of children at the time of under aged, and, children always need fully attention where parents may teach them every single word accordingly. Furthermore, now it is trending to get the children admit in daycare centers owing to less care person at home.
On the other hand, this paragraph will analysis this issue using the example from various countries such as Japan, United Kingdom, Pakistan and other 3rd world countries wherein people are hardly surviving their life for the sake of infants. For example, jobs are also most essential for those women who spend their life without any support from male person. Including this, I found mostly divorced women who have sacrificed their life by the reason to make their children happy and educated.
In Conclusion, women plays most significant role among children's life to escalate their career that demonstrate parents should be responsible and take care about them. Moreover, in order to be reduced crime rate in juvenile government should for the criteria to spread the awareness nationwide.
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- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such thing as food and educations? Or it is the responsibility of the government of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? 61
- Some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in the school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- People are less fit and active nowadays then in the past. What are the reasons for this? What measures can be taken to fix this? 73
- Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problem as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
...oungish people are facing problems like teenagers crime or the question raised that women...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an be elaborated by following arguments: To commence with, women are facing domes...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: ALONG_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'alongside'?
Suggestion: alongside
... directly impact on their children life along side in their social lives. In todays fast p...
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Line 13, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ria to spread the awareness nationwide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1656626506 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4288167531 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617469879518 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3481458443 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.909090909 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1818181818 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6363636364 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227410096711 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892792290853 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239941741981 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131362722292 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269945811758 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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