Many people are afraid of leaving house because of crime. Some think more action should be taken to prevent crime, but others think little can be done. What is your view?
Crime has been a worrying problem in all over the world. The question of whether home is the only place of safety has sparked a great controversy among the public. Some believe that this issue can be address by adding more actions while others concur with the notion that little can be done. However, I partly agree with the former.
There is no denying that deterring potential crimes is of importance in terms of guarantee the security of citizens. Legislating more strict laws and regulations on specific crime cases should be consider as feasible measure. For instance, prolonging the term of imprisonment could act as a deterrent against who have criminal intentions, making them think twice before indulging in illegal acts. Also, lowering the minimum age on punishment is another solution to ordinary crime because young offenders are liable to escape from punishments, which means this policy can totally frighten them off and dispell their notion of conducting illegalities.
Moreover, boosting the popularity of education or opening more technical schools in an urgent task. People who reside in slums with minimum education are inclined to violate rather than those with decent knowledge and a comparatively higher social status. Therefore, improving people’s intellectual standards is equivalent to constitute more job opportunities for people, which also means they will have a stable income and leave a little to be desired. When everyone have an affordability with their lives, there may be no need for them to risk committing crimes.
In conclusion, there a an abundance of formulas to tackle crimes as well as social problems. However, I think those totally depend on effectiveness of activities and continuous efforts from both government and individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...worrying problem in all over the world. The question of whether home is the only place of safety has sp...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...tions on specific crime cases should be consider as feasible measure. For instance, prol...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...onment could act as a deterrent against who have criminal intentions, making them t...
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Line 13, column 22, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tting crimes. In conclusion, there a an abundance of formulas to tackle crim...
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Line 13, column 22, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: a; an
...tting crimes. In conclusion, there a an abundance of formulas to tackle crimes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40569395018 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89014423979 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658362989324 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2512335777 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275332165265 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758470909225 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768800995591 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146991926636 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564810638154 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.