Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Hello Manisha,
Hope you are doing well. I was very happy to see you next weekend for the movie you planned but unfortunately my exam got postponed which was suppose to be happen tomorrow.Today I received a call from my lecturer and immediately after that I though of writing you.
Since you have already booked the tickets I do not want you to cancel the plan. Before writing to you I discussed this with my roommate and he agreed to join you for the movie. Hence, this postponed is kind of good for both of us as I got some time to prepare more for this exam and you got a chance to mingle with my roommate. Although I know you were looking forward to go with me but because of this rescheduling of exam this is not possible anymore. Still, I would like to say that you are going to enjoy equally in fact more than that with my roommate. He is a jolly personality with good sense of humor because of which he is able to engage people around him. Also, he was very happy about the movie as well as meeting you.
I am looking forward to see you soon after my exam.
Warm regards
Monika Goswami
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...unately my exam got postponed which was suppose to be happen tomorrow.Today I received ...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...unately my exam got postponed which was suppose to be happen tomorrow.Today I received ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Today
...which was suppose to be happen tomorrow.Today I received a call from my lecturer and ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ter that I though of writing you. Since you have already booked the tickets I d...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 370, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to going', 'to gonna'.
Suggestion: to going; to gonna
...lthough I know you were looking forward to go with me but because of this reschedulin...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
... meeting you. I am looking forward to see you soon after my exam. Warm regar...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, still, well, in fact, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31904761905 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32418029829 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3190439438 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4545454545 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26248679082 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115228511665 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620216370162 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187369342102 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464945706796 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.