In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reason for this is and how can it be solved?
As globalization is increasing, people are choosing unhealthy lifestyles. Busy schedules are one of the main reasons why people are choosing unhealthy ways to live. Laziness among youth is another reason health problems are increasing day by day.
Nowadays, people have become too busy to keep up a healthy lifestyle. People usually prefer ready to cook meals and not home-cooked meals. It is a well-known fact that home-cooked meals are healthier when compared to meals bought from stores. People are also left with little or no time for exercise. Working out is crucial to stay fit. By missing out on the gym, people are becoming obese. Obesity has many risk factors such as heart diseases. Constant work pressure can also result in stress. Stress can damage a person mentally, it can also cause physical illness.
Laziness among youth is another reason for health problems. Most of the youngsters spend their time in front of televisions or computers. They just sit on the couch all day. Because of which they do not have much movement in their body which is very unhealthy. Being lazy also creates a very unpleasant atmosphere at home. Youngsters might not have a long life-span if they continue to be lazy.
Overall, people are choosing to live in unhealthy ways which are causing health problems. This can be solved in a few ways. <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">People </span>must be<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> taught time management. By doing this, people can make time to exercise. Cooking workshops </span>must be<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> arranged. Youngsters </span>should not be<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> allowed to spend a plethora of time in front of large screens. These are some of the ways by which people can shift to healthier lifestyles.</span>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rs. They just sit on the couch all day. Because of which they do not have much movement...
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Line 11, column 545, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...me in front of large screens. These are some of the ways by which people can shift to healt...
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Line 11, column 619, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an shift to healthier lifestyles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49473684211 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63024129954 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2615186664 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.64 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.08 7.06120827912 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283645777405 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847276487607 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740831740175 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167053206592 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048553317381 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.38 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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