You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
Explain why you are selling the television.
Describe the television.
Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.
Hello Manisha,
Hope you are having a great time. Thanks for writing the last letter, glad to hear that you topped your college again. Now when your exams are over don't you get bored alone in room? Actually, I am writing this letter to tell you about my movement to New York City for my new job. Remember, I told you about my interview in a new company? I gave that interview just for experience and thankfully got selected.
Now when I have to move to another city. I would not be able to carry all my stuff with me while transition. That's why I thought about you while thinking of getting rid of my TV, it could be of much use for you. Since your exams are over now, plus you have shifted in a single room so having a TV is not a bad idea. My television is of LG company, 38 inches in size and it is black in color. It is in a great condition as I have had used it for not more than one year.
If you are interesting in buying it we can meet next week Thursday at my home. Also we can discuss about the price after you see the television. I hope you will really like it.
Please do not hesitate to give a call should you have any questions.
Thank you!
Warm regards
Monika Goswami
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ege again. Now when your exams are over dont you get bored alone in room? Actually, ...
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Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... all my stuff with me while transition. Thats why I thought about you while thinking ...
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Line 9, column 377, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
...LG company, 38 inches in size and it is black in color. It is in a great condition as I have h...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed it for not more than one year. If you are interesting in buying it we can...
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Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: BE_INTEREST_IN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interested'?
Suggestion: interested
...ot more than one year. If you are interesting in buying it we can meet next week Thur...
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Line 13, column 80, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...can meet next week Thursday at my home. Also we can discuss about the price after yo...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24786324786 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42446334264 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.335500636 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.125 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3125 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295480771111 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998344606873 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725834048183 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168077612315 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689679547029 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.