Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn
about a foreign country.
Throughout histroty, people tend to get familiar with other countries in the world. some people believe that newspaper and magezine provide and opurtunity for individuals to learnt about a foreign country and some disagree. I am on the opinion that that are not a good sources. In what follows, I delve into the most outstanding reasons for holdong suche a view.
first, by traveling people can learn a lot about a foregn country. In fact, people travel to a special destination and get in touch with people of that country they leran about their culture, religious ritual and other issue that it is impossible through magezine and newspaper. take myself as an example, when I traveled to France two years ago I undestand how treat with people and respect to their rules. this example demostrate that traveling pave the way for understanding bout a new country better.
Second, internet and particulerly social media is another solution for learning about a foregn country.people can get online and by clicking on mouseand obtain a lot of information about a new place. Moreover video clip and virtual tours is a decent choice for familiarity abou a new country. The results of a recent study conducted in my country indicate that people before any actions first ask internet for help especially befor traveling because nowadays they reserve hotel and take ticket only by internet. By this example persons undesrand the importance of net in every individual' life.
To make a long story short, I strongly believe that people can get inform with a new country by traveling and searching on internet. If every one want to earn more information about a foregn country search on internet and travel directly to that country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06597222222 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69166657708 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1309673333 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.214285714 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126106999617 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04910132361 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453926238636 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819936325113 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152169336667 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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