should government build more road to allow more vehicle owner or improve the network of public transport?
Many peopele say that authority may counstruct more road to allow more vehicle, while other say that develop public
transport. I partly agree with the given statement becuase both have their own advatages and dis advantages. My further
inclination would be justify in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, government equally improve road line and public tarnsport system. If management improve road ways so it
will help to reduce comute time as well as traffic conjetion too. For example, if government build six lane road so goods
transport will be going on smooth logistic way. as a result car owner also get saperate road so people reach their
destination with less time period. Acording to survay china has developed in transport system so they have less traffic
problem as compare to other country.
On the other hand, government also imrove public transport beacuase it wil decrese the air pollution, noise pollution and
it will improve safety standerd. In other words, if management improve public transport; such as, introduce metro train, so
mare and more people atrract it and used them and road accident will be reduce it. For example, delhi government build
metro train and after a year their accident rate on road are decreses.
To conclude, building more road are gives comfortness and it is less time cunsuming but improving public transport
reduces many problems and improve the government economic growth too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 31.9359605911 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42489270386 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52552407263 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609442060086 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.102231648 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.12807881773 339% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.33497536946 394% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376775955768 0.242375264174 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135348778165 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10550721154 0.071462118173 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122224388219 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101655168626 0.0609392437508 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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