Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A significant number of individuals believe that maintaining health and studies should be the job of state; however, others consider that people should take care of their own. Before reaching to a conclusion, this essay will discuss both the aspects.
To begin with, state should take a stand in aiding basic necessities because many people cannot afford these requirements. Good health and academics are costly parameters and many individuals lacks financial income to support these requirements, as a result, it impacts the nation with low literacy rate and poor health conditions. For instance, Ghana nation in Africa has highest poverty level as compared with rest of the African continent and according to the UN data, the people of the nation are more vulnerable to infections and lacks awareness.
However, others believe that people should have ownership in health care and education sector because these skills make them independent and strong candidate to face various challenges in life. Individuals should take a responsibility of their own needs as it benefits them in future. For example, taking care of health makes the good habit of healthy lifestyle and benefits the upcoming generation also by passing it to another legacy. As a result, it improves the living standard of an individual. Hence, individuals should take a responsibility of developing themselves.
In my opinion, while people should command their life by taking stand in controlling their health and improving education, I believe government involvement is must to aid people financially in these departments especially in developing nations where people have less source of income.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...th, state should take a stand in aiding basic necessities because many people cannot afford these...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...s. For instance, Ghana nation in Africa has highest poverty level as compared with rest of ...
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Line 9, column 275, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... of their own needs as it benefits them in future. For example, taking care of health mak...
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Line 13, column 160, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...on, I believe government involvement is must to aid people financially in these departm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47307692308 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8995918913 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0117968117 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.363636364 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281180347448 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10839956948 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779277233662 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170565887284 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705200069005 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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