Debating for Cigarette
Cigarettes is the one perilous influences for human health and it should be ban by government. It is
agreed that the governments must be concerned at public health in the future. This essay will discuss
the issue then come to a reasoned conclusion.
Smoking has become daily necessities for many people who addict with this toxic. Most of the society
realize the impact inside of cigarette components. The smoke from tobacco might increasing the
number of pollution and put the risk on the secondhand smoke. It is well know that smoking causes
non communicable disease such as cancer, heart disease and lung ailments.
Furthermore, stop the cigarette addict must be difficult and so many obstacles to control it. In
particular, it may be came from tobacco industry while they have contribute in many sector to help
the state income budget. This must be the responsibilities for the governments to force the
production of tobacco. For instance, the governments can make a regulation of tobacco product like
increasing the tax of cigarette or build a rule that there is no under the age can buy cigarette. On the
other hand, there is an attempt by the government to build a smoking area in some public spaces.
In conclusion, most of the dangerous disease had been causes by all of the elements of cigarette.
However, despite there are many harmful effect that come from cigarette most of people still smoke.
Thus, the government must be used their authority to control the smoker or vanish the cigarette
industry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'banned'?
Suggestion: banned
...ences for human health and it should be ban by government. It is agreed that the ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Agreed
...it should be ban by government. It is agreed that the governments must be concerned ...
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Suggestion: The
...n the future. This essay will discuss the issue then come to a reasoned conclusio...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Realize
... with this toxic. Most of the society realize the impact inside of cigarette componen...
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Suggestion: Number
...oke from tobacco might increasing the number of pollution and put the risk on the se...
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Line 11, column 74, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...isk on the secondhand smoke. It is well know that smoking causes non communicable ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Non
.... It is well know that smoking causes non communicable disease such as cancer, he...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
...e from tobacco industry while they have contribute in many sector to help the state inco...
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Line 17, column 80, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sector seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sectors'.
Suggestion: many sectors
... industry while they have contribute in many sector to help the state income budget. This...
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Suggestion: The
...ave contribute in many sector to help the state income budget. This must be the r...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Production
...ties for the governments to force the production of tobacco. For instance, the governmen...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Increasing
... a regulation of tobacco product like increasing the tax of cigarette or build a rule th...
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Line 23, column 63, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...cigarette or build a rule that there is no under the age can buy cigarette. On the...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
...der the age can buy cigarette. On the other hand, there is an attempt by the govern...
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Line 27, column 65, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...he dangerous disease had been causes by all of the elements of cigarette. However, despi...
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Line 29, column 73, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...harmful effect that come from cigarette most of people still smoke. Thus, the government mus...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Industry
...ol the smoker or vanish the cigarette industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10980392157 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77695797207 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572549019608 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.732884093 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.8666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188782489727 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662233179351 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069580218016 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618633604936 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627576653903 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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