Some people believe the large shopping malls are replacing local shops which is bad for local economies. What is your opinion?
The importance of local stores are been replaced for large shoppings, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The significant influence of large shopping Centers in each suburb has sparked the potential over local store for the local economie in recent years. It can be agreed that people can be better served for both and that big centers has minor prices than locals. Therefore, this essay will elaborate how it is excellent for consumers and how it is good for local owners and thus will lead to a logical opinion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why big shopping center are migrating to areas with crown of people, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that it is been a quite bad for the local economie that needs this income to survive. As an illustration, a University of Adelaide study has shown that big stores are installations are forcing local shopping to close down their doors for the aggressive loss of clients. Therefore, it is been for the government only.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which might overwhelm my opinion on which is better revange for us against these massives stores. For instance, local consumers should give more credibility for local store that are their people that depend of this to increase the local economic. Hence, both sides can help each other.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that large shopping really are forcing local store to close down is distinguished, although it depends of the local people make the difference and help theirselves should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03370786517 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63418653216 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550561797753 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3874352072 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.181818182 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395140303212 0.242375264174 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144037914299 0.0925447433944 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794269206761 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243886793489 0.151781067708 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395317594282 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.