Some people believe that entertainers are more important than scientists. Do you agree or disagree? Support with reasons and examples from your own experience.
With the ever-increasing popularity of people on You Tube it is now unclear which professions are of a great importance. People seem to forget about the spheres their parents used to work in and are obsessed with making money online. It is now believed that people in science are becoming less important than entertainers. This essay will disagree with the fact that entertainment sphere should be valued over science. Firstly, this essay will discuss how scientists contribute to medicine, and secondly, explain how technology are improving the globe.
Firstly, without researchers it would not have been possible to achieve high results in medicine. Nowadays, thanks to advances in this realm, life expectancy and the overall level of life has dramatically improved. For instance, in the middle ages both science and art played a vital role in a human development. However, it is due to a scientific breakthrough, people are able to live longer and not die of fatal diseases.
Secondly, thanks to the technological progress the sphere of entertainment has undergone several changes, not the other way around, which only proves its significance. Compared to the previous centuries, movie stars and cinematography is more popular than theatre actors. Moreover, it has become possible for every talented individual on Earth to become famous and to make their contribution. In this respect, scientists are responsible for changing the world for the better.
In conclusion, entertainers may make our lives better, although, scientists who hold responsibility for projects on a big scale have proven to greatly change the world we live in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'disagree that'.
Suggestion: disagree that
...tant than entertainers. This essay will disagree with the fact that entertainment sphere should be valued o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or changing the world for the better. In conclusion, entertainers may make our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3861003861 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05730562158 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625482625483 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0095410202 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127524878475 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043710804717 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530166859465 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650095264358 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638078250264 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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