some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. other people prefer to prepare and eat at home. which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers
I personally prefer to prepare food at home. Because I believe this food is individualized in to my own preferences and I can change its ingredients in the way that I like especially with the fact that I enjoy cooking very much. For example, I don’t like mushrooms but many restaurants put mushrooms in their soup, but if I cook it, I would simply leave it out
Another reason that I like homemade food is for the economical reason. Since I’m a student it is more beneficial for me to cook my own meals. However, eating out or ordering food from these restaurants or food stands does take less time and the best part is that I don’t have to wash any dishes after I’m done.
Eating homemade food has other benefits as well, like people can put the best quality ingredients in their food than eating something that there is information of what’s in it.
I guess what I/m trying to say is that homemade foods are definitely healthier than outdoors. In my life that fact has been proven to me many times over the years. Since I’ve gotten sick by out door’s meal many times.
But for the time efficiency part that I think is the only major disadvantage of homemade to the compare of out door is, I came up with a solution myself. people can make their meals some days ahead and put it in freezer.
Of course, restaurant can be fun too specially in the time of going out with friends and you just want to have some fun without worrying about anything else. sometimes is out door meals even a “must” for instance, grabbing a bit while you’re in a hurry.
Overall, I find preparing and eating food at home usually is better but for a change going to restaurant is absolutely necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...r is, I came up with a solution myself. people can make their meals some days ahead an...
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Line 11, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sometimes
...n without worrying about anything else. sometimes is out door meals even a 'must&apo...
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Line 11, column 159, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
...n without worrying about anything else. sometimes is out door meals even a 'must' ...
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Line 11, column 192, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... else. sometimes is out door meals even a 'must' for instance, grabbing...
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Line 13, column 109, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...but for a change going to restaurant is absolutely necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i guess, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65048543689 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70538935367 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6753630984 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.642857143 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190341298718 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793821138957 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103944889494 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994878567066 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632338505279 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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