Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Often when a teenager becomes a young adult, they tend to make decisions of their own. One such decision which a young adult makes is about whether they should live with their family or independent of them. As much as the alternate seems fascinating, I would prefer to live independent of my parents being a young adult.
I believe that living independently provides an individual with a sense of self-dependence in making other decisions too. Once a young adult starts living independently, he starts making his own decisions about other things - which are important for his survival as well as maintaining the continuance of his independence - at an early age. For example, a young adult dwelling independently would have to look after his consumptions, savings, expenditures, etc. He would need to balance them out in order to continue to live further a sustainable life. If the young adult's expenses become way more than his savings then as a result, he would have to depend on his parents which will defy the goal of being independent with which the young adult started. Hence, the young adult would have to learn on how make appropriate decisions which will help him to continue with his state of independence further, at a young age.
Such self-dependence achieved also helps a person to thrive better and early in his future than a person who has been dependent on his parents since young age. The latter would most importantly lack good judgement of critical situations occurring in his nearing future and would most often seek help from others in order to either make proper decisions or be confident about the decision he makes. On the other hand, the former who has already been making such decisions on their own would know how to weigh the merits and demerits of his own decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'make'?
Suggestion: make
.... One such decision which a young adult makes is about whether they should live with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, then, well, for example, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90460526316 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77624140519 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516447368421 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.1630593438 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269443041185 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130921563536 0.076458572812 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073912938574 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2115482865 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992051457931 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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