Some organization and company older people are the leader, but some say younger people should be the leader. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
becoming leader is a big dream of many people in the employment life. A group of organization prefer older people when assigning high position in company while others believe that younger generation should be the leader. I strongly support this idea as I trust young people shall be given chance to prove that they are qualified to be leaders.
A few enterprise would rather have more leader at their middle age or older because they are expected to lead the company base on their experience. experience is the one thing that young people will find it certainly difficult to compete with older people. leading a company by experience is proved to be correct, especially in older industry such as manufacturing industry. other reason might be considered by those companies is that older people simultaneously are loyal employees. I know a numerous people who work for the same company in more than 10 years and gradually, they become leader in their function of leader of the company. this might be one of rewarding method that some company use.
Conversely, in modern life, experience and loyalty might be less important compare to other elements of a leader to some other organization. There are more significant characteristics required as a leader such as innovation and adaptability. These are the thing I believe, young people would have competitive advantages. Lacking of experience is a weakness of youngster, however, it concurrently is a strength. Young leaders are not limited by their experience, this enable them to think differently and do differently. Additionally, people between 25 and 35 years old, in one study, have been proved to be the most adaptable to change. Specially, in the 4.0 industrial evolution, the market changes are counted not daily anymore, but hourly. Quick adaptability of younger leader will help the company grow faster and faster.
In conclusion, although older people have their own burdens, yet older leader are now may be a little outdated. In the new VUCA world, I strongly agree that younger people should have chance to be leader and really change the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, however, if, may, really, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09510086455 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86171645286 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547550432277 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8539473349 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.0526315789 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430117323087 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128365870616 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07567833956 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287407528045 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356117660984 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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