TPO 25
The lecture and the reading discuss a set of clay jars that have been found in Iraq. Although the passage claims that these clays could not use as electric batteries, the speaker refutes this idea through several reasons which I will describe in this reporter.
First and foremost, the reading points out that these vessels would not have other things that used for producing electricity such as wires. The lecturer, in contrast, rejects this by claiming that the absence of wires or other contents are not mean these vessels did not have them. She explains that these two clay were discovered by local people, not by archaeologists. Hence, other continents were not attracted or important for local people. And they recognized their importance. Therefore, they did not carry them.
Furthermore, unlike the passage which states that a set of clay jars were used for holding scrolls of sacred texts, the professor argues that these clays were similar to cylinders for holding scrolls. But, after some time people found that by adding some liquid or iron vessels they could produce electricity. Also, ancient people did not use the continent for one purpose. They used these vessels for multiple purposes.
Finally, although the reading passage says that batteries were useless in those times, the professor disagrees by mentioning that these batteries could cause a middle shock, and they could be a good device to show magical power. He also said that ancient doctors may have been using these batteries in order to heat the muscles of the patients like modern medicines.
- Many filmmakers make movies based on books. When a movie is produced based on books, some people prefer to read books before watching films, other people choose to watch the movie first. Which one do you think is better? Why? 60
- Do you agree or disagree？ It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book thandoing physical exercise. Explain your answer with examples and specific reasons. 70
- TPO 30 80
- TPO 47 80
- It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents job 66
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, may, so, therefore, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 259.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22007722008 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40344931837 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559845559846 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9278787838 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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