Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world work.
some people believe that starting to work after school and obtain some experience is better than completing a course of education for getting a good job. To a certain extent,I agree that experience is one of the requirements are demanded in business world. However I also believe that getting university education is warranty to find a good chance in business world.
On the one hand I accept that experience is crucial. we can encounter some circumstances that demand little or deep experience. At these moments people who start to work after school without finishing a university education programme may solve them better than others. For example, adjusting prices of goods that need analyzing skills occur increasingly. without formed abilities it wouldn't be able to facilitate our job.
On the other hand,I believe that we have obligation to complete a course of university education for getting one of the major jobs. university degree is on the top of many companies' requests. obtaining essential data about a field we work in let us mount to the top of business peaks. For instance,we have to know the law to defend our clients' rights as a lawyer and if we know them well we'll get the chance to be diversed from our colleagues and it also opens doors to the peak. İf some people didn't accomplish a university education there would be less successful people in all fields.
In conclusion, although I accept that starting to gain experience earlier is necessary,I also believe that education is the thing helps us to set our lives in more victorious way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93560606061 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77122620405 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4999399759 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296357560466 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094722229828 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915962763532 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17964259175 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808893761 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.