Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear Sir or Madam,
It is my pleasure to know that your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Within my perspective, I really want to suggest mr. nguyen, who has been working as a mentor at my office for a better part of the last ten years. With the mission of my organization, a lot for startups have been helped with his knowledge and experience. As you known, startup is a risk-driven business, so that, his help has been very meaningful for all young companies. Moreover, two startups have scaled up very fast and become unicorns with his support. I myself strongly nominate mr. nguyen for the community prize. I am surely that it would be pretty nice to him and startups ecosystem if he could receive this award.
Please feel free to let me know if you have anything to know more about him.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Kim
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- Using a computer ever day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 378, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'knew'?
Suggestion: knew
...th his knowledge and experience. As you known, startup is a risk-driven business, so ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68902439024 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51213592163 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689024390244 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3783211085 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0833333333 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245259001463 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766494950627 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109008442152 0.0603063233224 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108508792274 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101913433949 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.