Some people believe it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care for them. Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
some say that offering presents and perks to the ones we love are the way to express our care towards them. While others would argue that there are far good routes to do the same. This essay, however, discusses both views. In my opinion, I feel there are many other obvious ways to show our attention to the ones whom we care about.
To embark on, families and loved ones may not always expect alms from members, but, even if they receive they might not ignore them and accept them wholeheartedly. Anticipating about father and mother or sister and brother that they are happy only if presents are offered is not a matter of fact they would be happy either way. For instance, A study by a family association of the uk has revealed that parents who get gifts from their children are neutral about emotions and feel joyous occasionally only. It is to say offering doesn't really mean much.
On the other hand, when a person shows some concern about family health that definitely shows the individual's attention towards them and exerts a lot of difference than giving a gift. Taking siblings to the hospital when they are unhealthy would show how caring you're for them. going out for a tour with mother and father to a place they wish to go will indulge them in complete satisfaction rather than isolating them to home and offering grants. For example, A survey conducted on various families reported that spending good time with kids or loved one would keep them strong and fulfilled. Wealth is considered only when family members are healthy.
To conclude, Although presents at times make loved ones happy, caring would keep them comfortable at all moments. In my opinion, I believe everyone needs physical support when the insist which is emotionally connected but not gifts or alms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
some say that offering presents and perks to...
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Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e way to express our care towards them. While others would argue that there are far g...
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Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... To embark on, families and loved ones may not always expect alms from members...
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Line 5, column 529, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ccasionally only. It is to say offering doesnt really mean much. On the other ha...
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Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...family health that definitely shows the individuals attention towards them and exerts a lot...
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Line 9, column 263, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...hey are unhealthy would show how caring youre for them. going out for a tour with mot...
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Line 9, column 279, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Going
...y would show how caring youre for them. going out for a tour with mother and father t...
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Line 13, column 177, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ve everyone needs physical support when the insist which is emotionally connected but not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80967741935 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38770698391 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7399424713 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33097023407 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102296401261 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747083456495 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189195156051 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804438327533 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.