An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage of our natural environment. What are the causes and solutions?
Due to the increasing human population now, the comsumer products has experienced unstoppable rise of demands . This trend is putting a signficant pressure on the environment. This essay will discuss several causes and suggest some solutions to tackle this issue.
There are different reasons to explain for the issue . Firstly, in order to serve a need of human, many factories are growing each day. Consequently, Not only enormous areas of rainforests have been cut down to make space for such buildings, but also the operation of factories also attributes greatly to the global warming as great quantities of waste generated from the making process, are released directly into water. Secondly, as the process of buying something is eased, people fail to resist the temptation to buy more. That has add pressure on the environment, taking into account the staggering volumes of waste such as nylon, clothes' packages, fumes from delivery transportation.
Solutions to tackle the issue are suggested as below. Government plays the most important part in addressing this problem. Particularly, they should introduce laws to the limit the emissions from factories. Building these factories near lake or residential areas should be bans. Moreover, using renewable energies like solar, winds, and water need to be encourages widely instead of non-renewable ones.Individuals also should try be greener. They can choose products with less packaging and long expectancy. On the of that, they must reuse and recycle. so that the wastes can be reduced gradually
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41152263374 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92227225552 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683127572016 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.9546129817 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1875 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1875 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0756582484742 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0241289212723 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332471869593 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.060105735532 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545239548427 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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