The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps demonstrate the center of a small town, namely Islip at the present and how this place will be changed in the future.
It is obvious from the maps that there will be a number of innovations in this area such as the constructions of the bus station and the new housing.
Presently, in the southwest and the southeast of the town, there is a school and a park respectively. Besides, there are two areas of housing, one is in the middle and another is in the south of the city. Following the planed development, the park will be narrowed, the school will be still remained and then a dual carriageway will be constructed in order to connect these places. Moreover, a part of the housing located near the shop will become smaller and lead to the erection of a new housing.
As we can see on the design, in the north of the town, the countryside will disappear and the shops beside the countryside will be turned down to make a way for the bus station, the shopping center, the car park and the new housing. Additionally, in the middle of the town, the main road will be expanded and converted into the pedestrians only. But the shop in the south of the main road will not be demolished or converted as the other one. One more noticed point that all new places will be connected by the dual carriageway so that people can access to these places easily.
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- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. 67
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- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, moreover, so, still, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4422310757 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57474107408 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486055776892 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2372961318 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.077586865235 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375117788079 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469771498227 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685343231558 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544908101102 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.