The Future of Travel
Vast majority of people would be travelling once a year by plane. The travel is important to relaxing , enjoying and communication with others.
From my understanding of the situation,these days,make a journey, is easy than the last decade.
On the one hand,however, some people believe that travelling would be gotten worse. First and foremost , there are a range of problems around the world .It would be on changed on the travel such as, war and poverty. Second of all, some countries not would be allowed others to pass above their sky like Saudi Arabia and Iran.
On the other hand,others argue that travelling could be jumped in the high. To drive this point, there is development in manufacturing the aerplains .
I would like to <span style="font-size:15.0pt;font-family:Georgia;
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...travel would be jumped to the high level .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 150.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.47333333333 5.12529762239 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.72863751311 2.80592935109 311% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 101.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673333333333 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 94.4880944881 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.888888889 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201745862263 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852646784494 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634753003109 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866759843842 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990592876187 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.95 12.4159519038 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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