In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern society, it is common for both genders to work equally on a full-time basis. On that account, some people consider that they should split domestic workload as well. I totally agree with this opinion because women nowadays obliged to carry too many responsibilities.
Firstly, it is necessary to mention that historically females were bearing a burden of upbringing children, cooking meals, cleaning and taking care of every members of a family while men were breadwinners. However, nowadays the most women have permanent employment and have to spend whole day at work. Consequently, females may feel overwhelmed with all the tasks they are carrying, it is hard for them to solve it effectively, and this is exactly why men should share household chores with them.
Secondly, if a man wants to see a happy and satisfied woman next to him, it will be a great deal to help her with the housekeeping. Personally, I believe that both genders need some time for themselves and it will be difficult to have it if someone is tearing apart by the family responsibility and a job. In addition, both sexes are equal and it is reasonable that living together people divide household duties as well. The women should not be under siege from family to be able to live and act, as they want.
In conclusion, contemporary life is demanding from women to have full-time jobs and therefore it is sensible for both women and men to split all house duties. In my opinion, it is completely justified and should supported by our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88593155894 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81705173536 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589353612167 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1762376777 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.083333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223781745868 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731774466148 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688910180178 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141753249482 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516523863642 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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