All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The aurgument here is that If a company starts to spend more time with their employees, it will enhance the productivity of the company, rather then consulting with outside consultant to help them to operate more efficiently. this make sense to more envolved with your employee to make the work environment more productive. I mostly agree with this because of following 3 examples.
hiring a outside consultant to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. this also works the consultant that helps to ehance the productivity of companies are good at thier work and they are doing this from a long time and they a vast experience in this field. so, this might be good to hire a outside consulant as they are on the market from a long time. For Instance, A company started few years back now stuck at a point oor hitted a platue and now not able to enhance the productivity. In such scenerio hiring a outside consultant or private consultant will be very helpful. For such cases and reasons hiring a outside consultant is good choice.
However, rather than hiring a outside consultant for to enhance the productivity and operate more efficiently a company should be more envolved with their employees and spend more time listening to them and figure out their problem so that they can perform well and enhance the productivity. For examples, a bunch of married employees are not performing well just because they are getting time to spend a life with their family and so they are not happy with their work. In this case a company reaches to employee and asks them about there problem and try to figure out an solution that is beneficial for both employee and as well as company. so, this will directly enhance the productivity of that person or group as they are happy with job. Despite of, hiring a outside consultant to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficinetly a company should be spend more time with their employees and try to figure out problem with their employee and doing this will directly boost and enhance the productivity and work environment of the company.
this is a complex argument and one cannot come up with a agreement easily. But, I mostly agree that company should were to spend more time listing to thier employees and thier will be no need to hire a outside consultants to suggest ways to operate more efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80097087379 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63136798347 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.381067961165 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.6727122218 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.625 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408503981553 0.243740707755 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179108221476 0.0831039109588 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162592619385 0.0758088955206 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298433024033 0.150359130593 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309200621219 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.38706741573 80% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.