Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
History is irreplaceable part of our life. Personally, I believe that every one should know and study it. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in following essay.
First of all every subject has its own way of becoming what it is now. In university we choose our own field to study, that area which we enjoy and interested at. Since we chose the major we should try to complete it, which means that we must study the history related to our subject. For instance, my older brother now stu<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">d</span>y at university at astronomy major. At school he did not like the history lesson at all, but now he is really into it. He even did his research paper about history of astronomy and got the highest score.
Secondly, through out our whole life history will pursue us. Everything that we have now and the way we live in present are consequences of events happened in the past. To simply realize the system our world was created at we should know and un<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">d</span>erstand past. History also developes our ability to explain and analyse surrounding. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I am a senior in my high school and since ninth grade we study at classes divided by profiles, so I study in engineering class and before I never understood why do I need a history in my schedule, but lately I realised that history makes me think about things that happen now and I enhanced my abilities to analyse and make a decisions.
In conclusion, I am think that despite area of your studies you should know the history. This is because to have a complete knowledge in specific field, its history also needed to be learned. Additionally, awareness about past not only gives you an order of some historic events, but also become a reason of developement of your mentality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
... and got the highest score. Secondly, through out our whole life history will pursue us. ...
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Line 5, column 762, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a decision' or simply 'decisions'?
Suggestion: a decision; decisions
...hanced my abilities to analyse and make a decisions. In conclusion, I am think that despi...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...make a decisions. In conclusion, I am think that despite area of your studies you s...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'complete knowledge'.
Suggestion: complete knowledge
...ow the history. This is because to have a complete knowledge in specific field, its history also nee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.826625387 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40274861793 2.67179642975 127% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566563467492 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.3433958868 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6111111111 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154460969251 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522157975771 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312222998543 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104327698789 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039644054379 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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