More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Nowadays, it can be very difficult to live in cities. However, there are many people think that migrating to cities would make life better. this essay would analyze some of the difficulties of living in a city and will suggest way to remedy a situation
The main problem for migrant who have to face in a large city is that the cost of living is likely to be much higher than it is in small town or village. For example, the cost of foods in a city is more expensive than in a countryside and people have to pay rental cost if they will live in a city. One of the reason is social problems with the criminal and the poor. Polices could not monitor and manage activities, so it is chances for carrying out thefts. polluted environment is a significant problem in megacity. The emission of cars and factories which eliminate a good deal of carbon dioxide or hazardous chemical is cause of lung diseases. so the life in a city would not be good for health and it would put a pressure for everyone
migrant is pressing issue that demanding nation have to have method to reduce it. Firstly, government can give policies well-fair such as building social housing or affordable house. Secondly, the government should forbid vehicles and portrait in the media about using fresh transports. it can make decrease environmental pollution and traffic jam. Thirdly, urban areas in a suburb and a country. so it helps fall pressure with big cities. For instance, in Viet Nam in 2007 ha Tay was added in ha Noi city to suburb development
In conclusion, the government would have a lot of methods to tackle this problem and the migrant can have a better life in cities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62962962963 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58017490547 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548821548822 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5697762354 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363428497991 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971488213385 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972674321724 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228255638038 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937208029756 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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