Some people believe that the development of a country benefits from the high-educated university students, while others think that large amount of young graduates only leads to high unemployment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different opinions towards college graduates. Some of them think that a country's development is promoted by highly-educated talents and others reckon the soaring unemployment as the only consequence of the expansion in college. This essay will analyse both of their ideas and conclude my own opinion.
It is not uncommon to associate the development of society with the growing number of college graduates. Firstly, the higher education system has fostered a huge amount of expertised talents, which has greatly helped to improve the productivity in all works of life. This phenomenon is especially obvious in developing countries such as India and China. These countries' economic rising in recent years results from the higher-education expansion. Besides, with higher percentage of college graduates in society, citizen quality can consecutively improve and it is beneficial to the cultural development of a country. Undoubtedly, development in these aspects will make the country more competitive in the world.
However, while other people's concern that the college graduates only lead to unemployment is a bit extreme, it is not totally unreasonable. To begein with, the excessive graduates in these years have caused fierce competition. This is particularly severe in traditional manufactures, in which the human resources are substituted by automatic equipment and artificial intelligence. Furthermore, the sluggish global economic situation makes the employment more difficult in some regions. Although these phenomena are not the only result of college expansion, they are still inevitable byproducts of it. Therefore, the governments should emphasize these problems and introduce some strategies to cope with them. For example, they can offer financial supports and favourable policies in order to encourage the young adults to start up their own business.
In conclusion, my opinion is that the higher college graduates definitely assisted the development of the country and high unemployment is by no means the only result. However, the negative effects of college expansion should be seriously noticed and positively handled with.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73913043478 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13747606014 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5874856628 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241308896128 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691853051148 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678045613962 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154212481109 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558643206424 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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