The process below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
The diagram illustrates the life cycle of salmon. Overall, there are 3 main stages of fish development: ‘fry’, ‘smolt’ and finally ‘adult salmon’. Also there are 2 residences for their age period.
To begin with, ‘adult salmon’ is seeding salmon egg in order to start new generation of fish. Then ‘fries’ are hatched. The primary size of them is fluctuating between 3 and 8 centimeters, during the next 4 years they are growing in the lower river with fast flowing. On the morrow of that, they are moving to open sea. This stage of salmon is called ‘smolt’ (minimal length of that is 12 centimeters and maximal is 15 centimeters). By the next 5 years they grow up and reach the last stage ‘adult salmon’. In this period they can put off eggs in upper river with slow-moving (under the reeds, among small stones). The hatching period occupies 5-6 months. <p>As long as, the salmon life cycle still maintains, new generation will always be born and grow like the diagram. </p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he hatching period occupies 5-6 months.
As long as, the salmon life cycle sti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, still, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11695906433 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26495999203 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2494407117 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9166666667 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129716572758 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603597327302 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818821850898 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116734064283 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00315803537859 0.0819641961636 4% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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