Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recently I read an article about the increase in the number of interrupted pregnancies in Kazakhstan. Some practitioners state that the government should legalize it. However, some priests claim that it should be prohibited. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and agree with the idea of legalizing abort.
Let us start with the reasons why some doctors argue that pregnancy termination should be under law. The first reason is that it may reduce the number of deaths among the pregnant. Many women annually die of abort complications in uncertified places, because the legislation does not permit them to stop their pregnancy in hospitals, but if officials allows them, the number of faulty abort will decline. Another reason is that it can contribute to a decrease in the number of abort. if authorities makes abortion legal, but under the condition that, before the termination, pregnant women should pass numerous social workers, such as psychologists, in order to listen to their problems and attempt to convince them to keep the child. Therefore, after the analysis of these reasons, it is clear that officials should introduce a law permitting women to interrupt the development of the child inside.
Nevertheless, some priests advocate that abortion should be banned. They justify their opinion with the following arguments. Firstly, women have no rights to intentionally terminate the pregnancy. Potential children already have a soul in the body of their mothers, so any decision to stop the growth implies that they intend to murder them, which is wrong according to most religions. Secondly, it will prevent many pregnant women from making a rush decision about abort. Females often regret after they stop the development of a future child, since they decide it under insignificant circumstances, which frequently fade upon the birth. As a result, after the consideration of these arguments, it is obvious that society should be opposed to abort.
In conclusion, although a great deal of priests say that the public should be against the abort, I think that abortion should be allowed in the country for the above mentioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22922636103 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82892634739 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567335243553 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0165283398 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.388888889 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260401345307 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875894657354 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729226485864 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181646116711 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579805272427 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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