The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Most of us are working hard everyday in life to have a successful career in life. The careers we choose define us in this society most of the time. Some people thinks that the conventional way of living with a single job or a single career is moving out of trend. The new way of life is all about being opportunistic and have more than one income during the course of life. This essay will discuss how the single career option is an outdated one and having multiple source of income or having higher education will help you achieve the dream of having a successful career.
In the current economic condition having a fixed income might make you feel that you are going to be irrelevant. Before globalization came into picture a single income was quite sufficient to run a family. That means having a job with a decent pay is enough to lead a comfortable life even in cities. Things have changed since then, Now in-order to lead a decent life in a city, minimum requirement is to have at-least two incomes in a family.
The concept of having more than one income is not just about being in the current trend, It is also becoming a mandatory choice for one to have a successful career. So people look for options, Most people choose to educate themselves further in their relevant field. This education need not to be a full time course , It may be a part time diploma or a certification which will help them move up the ladder faster than their peers. The other option people are working hard in the recent times is developing a side hustle which will generate a secondary income for them to stay in the race of becoming a successful person in the society.
The single career option will help you survive in the current economic condition but will not be enough to achieve a greater feet in your career.The choice of generating more than one income is not just a choice but is becoming a way of life among the current generation and will be an eventuality in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
Most of us are working hard everyday in life to have a successful career in ...
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Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to define'
Suggestion: to define
...l career in life. The careers we choose define us in this society most of the time. So...
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Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: DURING_THE_COURSE_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'during'.
Suggestion: during
...rtunistic and have more than one income during the course of life. This essay will discuss how the s...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...el that you are going to be irrelevant. Before globalization came into picture a singl...
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Line 9, column 292, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...relevant field. This education need not to be a full time course , It may be a part t...
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Line 9, column 300, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... field. This education need not to be a full time course , It may be a part time diploma ...
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Line 9, column 316, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cation need not to be a full time course , It may be a part time diploma or a cert...
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Line 9, column 331, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... to be a full time course , It may be a part time diploma or a certification which will h...
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Line 9, column 507, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g hard in the recent times is developing a side hustle which will generate a seco...
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Line 13, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...o achieve a greater feet in your career.The choice of generating more than one inco...
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Line 13, column 146, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o achieve a greater feet in your career.The choice of generating more than one inco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55153203343 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47292592981 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456824512535 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.100502925 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.714285714 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394638214842 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140324420533 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942648138975 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258208041969 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960995876154 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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