You and your colleague want to use a company room. Write a letter to your manager and ask for permission.
In your letter, you should:
• explain why you need that room
• describe which room you need and why
• tell what changes will need to be done there.
Respected Sir,
I intend to write this letter to seek your usual support on an important matter. As you are aware I and Sam are working on a project named Crowdsourcing. In this project, we have to engage external customers quite often to gauge the pulse of the existing products of our company. Currently, we are facing a challenge in arranging different meeting rooms for customer interviews as sometimes facilities management team does not have any vacant room available at your required time and date.
In this regard, we want your approval for the permanent assignment of the customer integration lab until this project is executed. This would not only solve our room booking issue but also customers will feel privileged to be seated in a custom-designed room.
Furthermore, in order to make the room more appealing, we would like to suggest some changes. There should be round tables and more seating space to conduct customer focus group. Additionally, a camera should be installed in the room to monitor customer motion movements and also for recording the complete interaction for future reference.
We shall be grateful to you for your outright response to our request.
Yours Truly,
David
- You read an article in a newspaper about a city town Some of the information in that article is wrong Write a letter to the newspaper editions In your letter you should describe how you know the city town tell what the problems are suggest what you want t 94
- People in the current generation are not fit and active and it will cause health problems in the future What could be the reasons and suggest solutions for this issue 47
- Nowadays people are working too hard What is the reason for that What should employers do in order to prevent employees from this 64
- Some people encourage young children to leave their parents’ house as soon as they become adults while other say children should stay at their parents’ house as long as possible. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 61
- Some people think that young people should follow older people's examples. Others believe it is quite natural for teenagers to challenge what old people say. Describe both point of views. Give your opinion with reasons and relevant examples. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Respected Sir, I intend to write this letter to seek yo...
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...response to our request. Yours Truly, David
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Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to our request. Yours Truly, David
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14646464646 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82098625894 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651515151515 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.045605057 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6363636364 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247283803822 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961042741171 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507891785897 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154481336959 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360385805174 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.