The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures describe a layout of a hospital in 2007 and its development in 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the transportation had been improved a lot in three years, and the road's infrastructure was innovated, which helps citizens easier to transport.
In 2007, the city hospital was covered by the ring road. A number of bus stations were located on both sides of the hospital road, and the car park for staff and public nearby was laid on the right-hand of the hospital road, above the city road.
In 2010, a new public car park has been built next to the city hospital, on the East of the map. The three bus stop was completely demolished to make a new way for staff car park. Two roundabouts were constructed, which locates on two sides of the hospital road. All left bus stops were removed, replaced by a new bus station. The city hospital and the ring road remain unchanged.
- The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006 72
- The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. 84
- People should look after their health for personal benefits, rather than a duty for a society. What extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extend do you agree or disagree?What other measure do you think might be effective? 56
- The table and pie chart show in percentage terms the results of a survey of a new shopping complex in Auckland, New Zealand. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'roads'' or 'road's'?
Suggestion: roads'; road's
... improved a lot in three years, and the roads infrastructure was innovated, which hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6125 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60048072479 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0549859233 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21634706906 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109072566818 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689572265754 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13030625339 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632825598786 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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