In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Even though, agriculture had experienced tremendous development so far, there are still individuals sufering from hunger and famine. The main reasons causing this phenomenon are that the advances did not happen al around the world equaly and also the new methods and technologies implemented by farmworkers in these days and age are expensive to own and use.
The development of agriculture around the world does not follow a same patern and in some regions such as USA or Europe there are exponential growth in the amount of goods produced by farmworkers while in other parts for instance Africa the increases in the amount of food produced by farmers are not so great and did not meet the needs of growing population. One the other hand nowadays production of food in farms is a process in constant need of technology which in many cases are not cheap and affordable for all the people around the world.
To over come the hunger crisis forever new technologies and methods should be invented in a way that they could be affordable for farmers in poor areas of the world. Furthermore International organization such as UN or FAO which are accountable for helping those whom suffering from hunger should invest in bringing this methods and instruments to those who are in need of them.
In conclusion, growing plants and extracting food from them has a different story in every part of the world in some parts of the world it takes so much effort to grow food and advance tools and methods are too expensive for some of these regions and unless developed countries and transnational organization help them otherwise they can not fight hunger and poverty.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9219858156 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75753400031 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535460992908 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7221424971 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 198.285714286 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.2857142857 20.7667163134 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1428571429 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147170872359 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698210555062 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380856099503 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865809786997 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203985048388 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.0946893788 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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