Some people say that music is a good way to bring people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
we are living in an era, where music has taken a significant place in people’s life. Some people are of the view that music unites people of multiple cultures as well as different age groups. I completely support the idea that music connects one person to another at any level.
One of the main reasons is that people enjoy music, whether they enjoy it or not. Nowadays, they have gain access to a variety of songs, artists, genres, languages and so on. They are free to choose whatever they like. Take BTS as an example, recently this Korean boy band group gain insane popularity internationally. Besides Koreans, their fandom based on Asians, Indians, Americans, Arabs and so forth. Even though fans do not understand Korean, they really enjoy the beats of their songs. So, music is a factor that unifies the culture of different people.
In a similar way, people of different ages associate’s feelings towards music which brings them closer to their special person. The logic behind is that some special memories are attached to the song or music. One of the examples can be a nursery rhyme, namely, “twinkle, twinkle, little star.” Almost every parent sings this poem for their child. Meanwhile, at times, they remember how their parents are used to sing this poem for them and cherished those moments. Therefore, you see how music creates loving bonds with different age person.
In conclusion, I truly believe that music is an important factor that brings together people of diverse cultures and age groups. In the future, I hope the music will be considered as an element to integrate people in innumerable ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01818181818 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62878157365 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7689670779 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.1764705882 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285022000686 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954345702812 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103853072099 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187276894763 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712294999376 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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