The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph provides information about the sports played in New Zealand in 2002 by girls and boys.

While , boys tend to play soccer most of the time, girls prefer Netball.

Least played sports by girls is cricket, while boys play Netball mostly less.

Although, Girls play Netball 25% , they also love swimming 22%. While Athletics, Marital arts, Basket ball, Tennis, Soccer are less preferred by girls which is below 10 %. Cricket is least preferred by girls that is 1%.

Usually, Boys prefer to play Soccer the most that is 25% , Swimming and cricket are 15% and 10% respectively and rest are less than 10 %.

Other sports are played by boys , but girls play them very less.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 576.0 965.302439024 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 117.0 196.424390244 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28886816799 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13513333739 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 106.607317073 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57264957265 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 143.1 283.868780488 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3721459699 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168378976676 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930230489997 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941340112266 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119595987183 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945295048403 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 61.2550243902 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.3012195122 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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