Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Recently, artificial intelligence becomes a great concern over the world. Some people believe that AI will bring positive improvement to our lives. However, Other affairs artificial intelligence develops too fast, and we are not ready for it. In my opinion, this new technology will change our world, people should adapt as soon as possible.
Speaking in the first view which has a positive attitude, most of them are engineers or technicians. They always care about new technology to improve their living conditions. artificial intelligence spread out in main regions such as computer vision, 5-G technology, auto-driving car, economy. When multi-media mentions this technology, it has become a hot trend. more people develop other applications in agriculture, human health, management. AI gradually changes the world and has positive impacts on our lives.
In the second view, the group of people are worried about AI; most of them can be a manager or low-tech people. In the first case, we can list some of them such as CEO of Alibaba, CEO of Tesla. They were alert people who develop out of control of the applications about AI. It will have a terrible effect. For example, AI drones can be used to kill a lot of residents during a short-time; robots learn faster, more things than us. Those CEOs affair AI robots can reduce the chance to find good jobs for graduate students, especially, people are in low-tech regions such as agriculture or repeat works.
In my opinion, AI is a good chance for everyone who is ready to learn new things. If we can study seriously and apply it as well in the passion region, we can get a positive benefit from AI. However, if no law is proposed to prevent the out of control AI application, AI can give a terrible effect on our lives. Great technology needs careful management.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, well, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90938511327 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77344201372 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556634304207 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0833841181 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.85 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.45 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276027853072 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831845354274 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612315950692 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180518808461 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104768935512 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.