Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, companies are searching for the best schedule which fits better for employees. I strongly belive that having a job where i work only for three days a week for long hours is more enjoy">enjoyable that having one wiyh five days a week for shorter hours because of two main reasons which i would describe completely in following of this essay.
To begin with, three days a week for long hours job make four other days of the week completely free. employees can plan more efficiently for their free days. They may try travelling and going outside the city for days or even spend their visiting museum or soccer stadium for an appealing football match. By doing so, the job became more enjoy">enjoyable and interesting for employees. As an example, I was working for an artificial intelligence company three days a week for twelve hours from Monday to Thursday. I used my free days to go climbing and fishing in a countyside lake. that feel of freedom was a really fantastic experience which worth that twelve hours working continiously.
Secondly, the less you challenge various tasks in your job the more your brain relaxes. job enviroments are always with the stress and pressure and these business exhaust brain of employees. brain fatigue will significantly reduce efficiency and performance during job. so when employees spend less days at work, their brain are more fresh and their performance is not only reduced but also increased. increase in performance will make employees more confident during their job and let them enjoy their job. For example, during my working period in that AI company, my managers completely probe my progress and i enjoyed for being useful in my job.
In conclusion, I personally belive that working only three days a week for long hours is more enjoy">enjoyable than working five days a week but for shorter hours. I mentioned the easy planning for free time and brain freshness as my supportive reasons for my strong belief.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03915662651 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08461236302 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515060240964 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1429395287 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4117647059 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500222630085 0.236089414692 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157860241679 0.076458572812 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134014547014 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338301704928 0.150856017488 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878463098519 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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