Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. But others
say films should have educational value. Discuss both views and give your
opinion.
It is true that the question of whether the function of movies is only relaxation or also education remains a source of controversy. While a number of people suppose that film producers should focus on its entertainment quality only, I would argue that cinematic products also teach people a lot of lessons.
On the other hand, there are numerous reasons make people believe that the main quality of films is entertainment. Every year, thousands of blockbusters that attract audiences by their advanced visual effect and superstar casts are published to the cinemas. Nonetheless, the subjects and plots of these movies are mainly simple and straightforward which was mostly about love stories, the battles between the goods and the bads or sci-fi. Because of that, the viewers barely need to take the insights of these into account and would be completely relaxed and exhilarated after watching films. As going to cinema is considered a type of recreational activities, many people tend to go for soothing, funny films as a good way of reducing and alleviating their strain. Another reason is that many people especially children are likely to get bored and give on movies that have too many philosophic and academic contents.
One the other hand, the idea that movies should be included more educational content could be beneficial in some ways. Firstly, by taking advantages of the interest of people for filming, some subjects like history, science, family or geography could be combined with the main subject to provide viewers more knowledge and shape their moral personality. Secondly, the addition of education topic could be an effective way to restrict negative content such as violence or sexuality which may severely harm youngsters. For instance, in 2012, in the United States, a teenager attacked a cinema by machine gun after being obsessed by Joker – a notable villain in The Dark Knight movies.
In conclusion, although both views have their undeniable points, it seems to me that we could add more educational subjects to movies to enhance their knowledgable quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18289085546 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77399713135 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607669616519 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.8084615285 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.153846154 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197266597785 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631747282659 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562245700412 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116424199525 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409075527956 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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