Nowadays, more and more people are finding out about their family history. Why? is it a positive or negative development?
These days, finding an ancestor’s history is becoming increasingly popular among people. This essay will discuss why this is happening and put forward several positives to find out family history. In my opinion, this is a positive development which can avoid health problems, keep grandparent’s history alive, and get benefits to opt for their life advice.
To begin with, there are several reasons why people are keen to figure out the family’s history at this juncture. The most important reason is that it helps them to understand the medical history of their ancestors. Knowing the medical history enable them to aware of any risk and consult with Doctor for better prevention. It is often claimed, for example, that over 30% of people's lives can be saved by knowing their ancestor’s medical history as it would help doctors to track genetic diseases and treat them in advance.
A further reason is that they would be able to know about the personal history of their grandparents including the information about where they came from, what language did they speak, and how did their survive in a difficult time. This data allows people to keep their ancestor's memory alive. A recent article suggests that the ancestor’s origin and cast help a lot when it comes to marriage proposal because most people are keen to know about family background including caste; therefore, having the abovementioned information gives an edge to both families to satisfied to each other’s.
A final reason is that family history opens the door to learn critical life advice given by ancestors. Their words of wisdom help them to grow and learn a lesson from their mistakes. What’s more, they can pass on this advice to the future generation for the betterment of their children.
In conclusion, I strongly support the idea of having a family history as it has brought about too many benefits for this to be considered a positive trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1397515528 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83445624438 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562111801242 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9839854683 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.214285714 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245469790498 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847440113498 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053078288586 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131342882713 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359071780812 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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