Travel is important for personal development.
There are many factors which have an undispensable role on personal development. Some people claim that travel is more critical for sharpening the mind, even more than various foods! others do not think so. In my view, formers are right. I feel this way for 3 main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, regarding the issue of being different perspectives in world, each person might assert that his or her own thought is correct. For example, before I have been introduce with different religions, I had thought that my religion is better and complate. Observing enourmous religions carefully through travel, I found that each religen is respectful.
Another aspect of travel is modifying our lifestyl. To clarify, 5 years ago, I was fat and when I visited turkish for the premier time, I tested delicious local foods in that country. I used to eat only meat, but their foods prepared with different kinds of vegetables. Not only did I enjoy eating them, but I also get their receipes and learn how to cook them. It was terrific. I could lose my extra weight astonishingly.
most importantly, appreciating from our condition is an incredible gift in our life and is easily accessible when we travel. If we face with trouble in a small trip, we will not depress in our real and rutine life. For instance, last year when I was in cruize ship, we encounter with a great mount and our ship damaged seriously. I thought I had been dead that time. Fourtunatly, I rescued by help of other people. Now, I am realy happy for this expreience, because I try to enjoy more from my life.
In all, what drives somebody to deduce that travel has vital effect on human's development perhaps fall in to 3 basic categories including expanding horizon mind, improving lifestyle and being more happier in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Others
...the mind, even more than various foods! others do not think so. In my view, formers ar...
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Suggestion: introduced
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... found that each religen is respectful. Another aspect of travel is modifying ou...
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...cause I try to enjoy more from my life. In all, what drives somebody to deduce t...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
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Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...zon mind, improving lifestyle and being more happier in life.
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...festyle and being more happier in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so, for example, for instance, i feel, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82334384858 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67047696546 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643533123028 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3768663528 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.45 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.85 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201887754782 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477714452087 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476404425691 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103857038943 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613581488843 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.