whether a job which can lead to a secure and successful future is more easier to identify in the past compared with nowadays.
With the development of advanced technology and science, great changes have taken place in our daily life. There is no doubt that a prosperous job is one thing that every one wants to pursue in order to achieve the individual value. However, the debate comes that whether a job which can lead to a secure and successful future is more easier to identify in the past compared with nowadays. As far as I'm concerned, I hold an positive opinion about that especially when taking the work competition and stability into consideration.
Firstly, in the past, the competition pressure is small and it is easier to find a new field where can fully help us meet our value. For example, when I were a child, the internet was still not popular and a few of people engaged in this occupation because of the lacking experience and insight. Therefore, Ma Yun, a famous investor in China, he tried his best to make some research based on the circumstance of society and began his invest.Finally, he succeeded. As he confessed, he never worry about his decision. It is because of the small competition and right direction that make him confident.
Secondly, the work is very stable and almost no one will be dismissed, which lays a solid foundation for the development in the future. As we all know, in the past, the economy is not as good as today, people generally worked in a national company where the occupation is distributed by the country after graduating from school. As a result, there is little chance for people to lose their their work only if someone makes a great fault. On the contrary, people are easily to be fired because of the low profit of company. In term of this aspect, it is easier to find a prosperous job with the elimination of out of employment.
Admittedly, nowadays, there are a lot of opportunities of job and advanced technology provides us more possibility. However, the great competition and uncertainty make it fade compared with the past.
In conclusion, based on the reasons I stated above, I still insist that the past gives us a easy way of identifying a prosperous job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
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Suggestion: I'm
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Finally
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'worries'.
Suggestion: worries
...he succeeded. As he confessed, he never worry about his decision. It is because of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76566757493 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83757868381 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536784741144 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9124461007 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.882352941 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31362439257 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950823410683 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195509208107 0.0737576698707 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171629324151 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134323179432 0.0645574589148 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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