Do you agree or disagree? A person should never make an important decision alone.
decision on the important issue is always crucial for person's life. people's decision-taking approach is the various person to person. some people believe that decisions by discussing with others will be a fruitful while, some people make their decision on their own. In my opinion, a decision with a consultant will be very worthy for the person as people may avoid the risk and comes with a better idea.
suggestion always unravels the risky part of the decision that the decider fails to see. many facts with negative consequences may present in the decision which people often not care much as they have the only eye on the discernible positive as well as negative parts of the process. On the involvement of the many people in the process facilitates multi-vision that in extent can see a minute problematic situation. For instance, back in my high school, I was going to join the public club so that I could be more involved in the outer program. Literally, I was unaware of the enormous time that I had to spend on the program as part of its responsibility. Luckily, I had discussed with the joining club with my parents as they suggested me not to join the club at that time since, it was more time demanding, it could hamper my study. Ultimately, that paid me a lot to keep me away from the impending trouble.
an idea will be filtered or it modified into more auspicious on the group discussion. As many people have a certain perception of the matter; so on the discussion, many more can be added or way of doing or executing ideas can be changed in a better format. The habit of free to keep suggestions always income an idea or the part of the idea that may not be generated at the time solitude. The perfect paragon of the topic is the inventor of Facebook; he kept refining his plan on the discussion with college and finally, the attitude pays him well as he has been one of the billionaires of the current time. Certainly, people will be benefitted if they welcome the suggestion and do after the collection of lots of perspectives.
In conclusion, alone decisions most of the time become suicidal and decisions after discussion will be the step for the colossal success in the future.
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- Any field is a combination of leader and follower. They are the functional elements of any human social system. On any filed leader has the prime importance as he should have capacity to assemble a followers to shape of any desired results in a process. 50
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 66
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 50
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Leadership comes naturally one cannot learn to be a leader Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 58
- TOEFL T P O 4 Integrated Writing Task 52
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63010204082 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72624246155 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502551020408 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2350140047 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.764705882 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12014773308 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048885982646 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560335224796 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082861269873 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613945720381 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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