Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
The trend of living together with the parents or away of the parents is easily seen in the eastern world and western world respectively. In the eastern world child trend to live along with their families while in the western world, young people live independently from their parents as soon as possible. Although I belong to the eastern part, I firmly believe that it is good to have an independent life and live away from the parents as soon as possible. I would like to justify my opinion with the help of following reasons explained in the paragraphs below.
Firstly, living away from the parents will allow you to make the decision on your own. Living with the parents means you need always seeks help and suggestion from them in the small issue also. Taking independent decision will help you to face the harsh condition in the future. The practice of taking decision will be helpful when there will be no one else to help you. For example, I used to live with my parents and use to consult with them for even a small issue and they were ready to help me anytime. But then when I started living alone in the earlier days I was confused and I used to fear taking any decision. Later on as the days passed away, I become very habituated to take the decision on my own no matter how difficult was the situation.
Second, living alone will help you to understand of your abilities. When we are together with the parents we won't be able to know our self. The strength and weakness of the individual will always be overshadowed by the presence of the parents. To be more specific, when I used to live with my parents, my parents used to handle every activities of the kitchen, I rarely used to do any kitchen related activity. But when I started alone, I found myself to be a good cook. However, I found myself very poor at maintaining the decoration of the house. I wouldn't have know my strengthens and weakness if I had continued to live with my parents.
Thirdly, living alone helps you to be economical. When you live with your parents, parents are the one who pay the larger bills and you rearly need to think about the expenditure. But then managing the limited resource of money will be very important in the future, most probably when you get married or have a child. For instance, had I continued to live with my parents I wouldn't have known the meaning of saving the money. But when I started living independently, I had to spend a lot of time in planning where the money should be spend or how much to save.
Although, it might be very difficult emotionally to remain away from the parents for few months initially but living independent teaches us the lesson. It helps us to show the darker part of our life, teaches us with how to cope with the difficult situation. Thus, I firmly believe that living independent will be a better option than living along with the parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...e decision on your own. Living with the parents means you need always seeks help and su...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...suggestion from them in the small issue also. Taking independent decision will help ...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ple, I used to live with my parents and use to consult with them for even a small i...
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Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lp you to understand of your abilities. When we are together with the parents we won...
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Line 9, column 552, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ntaining the decoration of the house. I wouldnt have know my strengthens and weakness i...
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Line 9, column 565, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...decoration of the house. I wouldnt have know my strengthens and weakness if I had co...
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Line 13, column 375, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...d I continued to live with my parents I wouldnt have known the meaning of saving the mo...
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Line 13, column 535, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...e in planning where the money should be spend or how much to save. Although, it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2380.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 525.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53333333333 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46930471178 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424761904762 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.9 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6118517584 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5384615385 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1923076923 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237385507565 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744675320194 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699413264596 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147029196745 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615854857223 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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