Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
it has been viewed by other people that doing a job that makes you happy has more benefits than earning a hefty salary while others are opposing the notion and believe that when you have more money it leads to improved quality of life. With the increase in the cost of living in some countries worldwide, I believe that there should be a balance between earning a lot of money and enjoying the job that you do .
On the one hand , there are reasons why one needs to enjoy the work that they do.First of all, when an employee enjoys the work they are engaged in,there is a tendency to excel in it and this improves productivity of that particular organization. For instance,if you hire managers who are motivated and enthusiastic in performing their work ,they are bound to pass it on to subordinates and this will increase production in the company.Secondly,if people have interest in the job that they do they will always want to develop themselves further by improving their knowledge and skills and by so doing it adds value to the organization and the employees also get some job satisfaction as well.
On the other hand, earning a good salary has some benefits as well.To begin with, when you have enough money ,you are able to live a lifestyle of your choice.Considering the stressful world that we are living in nowadays there is a need for one to take some time off work and go on holidays.this is only possible when you are earning a good salary .Another reason why a good salary leads to an improved quality of life is that one is able to get the best medical care in the event of ill- health as they can afford to pay for it.
In conclusion, I believe there should be a balance between earning a good salary living a better life and doing a job that you enjoy best.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52469135802 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68282005165 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478395061728 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.07661118 49.4020404114 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 244.333333333 106.682146367 229% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.0 20.7667163134 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.1666666667 7.06120827912 314% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276420060259 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157986616688 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840132976106 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19173185569 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827211566558 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.9 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.13 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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