You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him/her to the party. In your letter:
• explain the reason for the party
• give the date and time of the party
• suggest what the classmate could bring to the party
Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________
Dear Jack,
How’re you buddy? Actually, through this letter I would like to invite you on a surprise birthday party of my friend Lena.
Although, she was good in study, she had failed in last examination. Due to this, she has been surfing from depression state from a long time and wants to stay at hostel all the day to read books all the time. But the doctors strictly told her to spend some time with friends to feel rejuvenate. Moreover, she miss her family all the time and not able to focus on her health and study. Owing to this, I decided to through a party on her birthday to change her mood.
To rejuvenate her I decided to through a surprise party on her birthday. All the arrangements will do by my uncle Wilson at his Hotel Wilson villa near to our institution on 10th Nov. It will starts at 10 o’clock.
She is found of Indian sweet dish Rice pudding. As you’re are very good cook. You could bring this to feel her jubilant. I hope you will also enjoy this party.
Best regards,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 311, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'misses'.
Suggestion: misses
...iends to feel rejuvenate. Moreover, she miss her family all the time and not able to...
^^^^
Line 7, column 467, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rty on her birthday to change her mood. To rejuvenate her I decided to through a...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 193, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
...to our institution on 10th Nov. It will starts at 10 o'clock. She is found o...
^^^^^^
Line 19, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enjoy this party. Best regards, Aman
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53723404255 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41604153053 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632978723404 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4641433312 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.8666666667 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5333333333 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211710149333 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760049801772 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635405631644 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143773005996 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046261555983 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.16 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.