Some people believe that employees should stay in the same job for the rest of their lives. Others think they should switch jobs at least once during their career. To what extent do you agree/disagree? Partially agree with both views
Opinions are divided on whether or not people should remain in the same job forever. Although it can be assumed that high-skilled professionals tend to stay in the same jobs, I agree that if people want to expand their professional experience and develop new skills they should change jobs even if just once during their career. In this essay, the main reasons for staying in certain jobs and the advantages of changing professions will be discussed.
It is true that in some professions the most certain decision is to pursue a career always doing the same type of job. This is because highly skilled workers such as doctors, pharmacists or lawyers invested a great amount of time and money to get qualified in a specific profession and consequently they are unlikely to opt for another professional path. For example, a student that aims to become a doctor has to spend at least six years at the university which involves an enormous commitment in studying several subjects related to the human body, diseases and medicines not to mention the fact that they have to pay for housing, food and education fees. For these reasons, it is totally understandable that some professionals tend to stay in the same job forever as the effort to qualify was immense.
However, in professions that do not require specific qualifications employees that move to another job are likely to benefit in terms of experience and better income. This means that workers that change jobs develop skills that are related to a specific workplace and consequently their work experience and capacity to adapt to different work environments is greatly boosted. As for employees’ financial status, when changing to another career they are likely to benefit from better opportunities that pay higher salaries as a consequence of their broader work experience. For instance, recent studies have suggested that most of the recruiters prefer candidates with vast experience regardless of their qualifications because despite being more expensive employees, they are likely to contribute the most to the success of the company they work for. Therefore, many employees gain an advantage when moving to another career.
In summary, while in some careers employees are more likely to remain in the same job, I believe that in several professions employees are highly benefited when they move to another job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
Opinions are divided on whether or not people should remain in the same job fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, while, as for, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in summary, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17268041237 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87387198478 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510309278351 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8605485596 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.384615385 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8461538462 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325212463053 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120741943748 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668144286956 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211941427995 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062319469603 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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