Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Nowadays, technology has been reached the top of its advance. In this regard, there is a controversial debate which involves every member of society from childhood to adult is whether movies and television have a negative effect or positive. Although some people think that the news around the world always has been prepared by television, I strongly believe that the negative effect of this product is much more than their positive aspect. I will develop my own reason in the subsequence paragraph.
To begin with, I would like to mention at the time that every individual consumes in front of the tv or movies. For instance, I stand in front of the tv to watch cartoons or movie in y childhood and wast my life instead of learning issues which constitute the fundamental of my entire life. If I never wasted my life on front tv, I would guarantee my future career by getting more achievements and skills. In addition, I think that people can get information online. In this regard, they can select the program that is useful. this is why I do believe that television has more disadvantages.
Secondly, in some case, there is bad and inappropriate information in
tv or some movies that are not suitable for people of every age because there haven't any ability to recognize the right or wrong information. I can mention the advertisement on the tv which can give wrong information to children or adults. For instance, I remember a Toy ad which contained a hero I always wanted to have this instrument. someday my dad buys it for me but I realize that wasn't so beautiful that I saw it on tv.
In light of the above-mentioned reason, I strongly believe that the negative affection of tv programs or movies is more than the there advantages. Furthermore, the importance of a well-balanced life courage me to spend my time more effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has always been
...le think that the news around the world always has been prepared by television, I strongly beli...
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Suggestion: This
... can select the program that is useful. this is why I do believe that television ha...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he program that is useful. this is why I do believe that television has more disa...
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Suggestion:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Tv
...bad and inappropriate information in tv or some movies that are not suitable fo...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...e for people of every age because there havent any ability to recognize the right or w...
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Suggestion: Someday
... always wanted to have this instrument. someday my dad buys it for me but I realize tha...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...y dad buys it for me but I realize that wasnt so beautiful that I saw it on tv. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i think, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7875 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92664884082 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521875 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3807782639 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155895156303 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509540529182 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558319332939 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08426303678 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697391655742 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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